“What if I topple your paradigm?”
Her finger played nervously with a loop underneath long black curls. She pondered his words. Was this honey sweet flirtation or just wearing on her last nerve?
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This is my first second Trifextra submission to Trifecta. To my delight, my last entry received some positive feedback from nice folks (isn’t everyone nice… until they get to know me). As an added bonus, my writing didn’t get me run out of town.
This weekend’s assignment asks for exactly 33 words, 30 of my own and three of the following:
topple paradigm underneath nerve honey loop
My imagination helped me to squeeze them all in, so hopefully it doesn’t fault my entry. Time will tell.
I’m impressed that you used all of the words, and in such a intriguing entry. Nicely done.
Thank you for the kind words and encouragement!
Kudos for using all of them.
I’m guessing honey…
NOW that was well payed!
lol and well pLayed:)
I initially used 4 before I discovered my mistake. I’m impressed you got all 6 in, even if it faults your entry – it was an awesome entry.
Cute.. and worth pondering… and using 6 words is an achievement.
A fascinating piece with many possibilities,liked it:-)
You got all six? Wow. I didn’t even notice until I read it explicitly. They fit so perfectly together!
Cute piece (:
I wonder what her response will be? Could go many ways.
Thanks for linking up!
Very nice! I like that you used all the words and it didn’t come off as obvious or forced.
This is great! You used all of the words perfectly!